Location Recce

This week we decided that we would use our college grounds to produce our film. It is a perfect location according to our script, where we even talked to our media teacher who agreed that he would open one of the classrooms for us which would be perfect for our closing scene. Furthermore the fields surrounding the college are perfect for filming our last scenes, where we need desolate fields. We discussed and asked staff when would be the best times to in our location so we decided that after school ours were the best.

RE:Camera Shot list

S.B.Shot#	Angle	Movement	Notes
1.	Extreme close up	Dolly shot	Will be an extreme close of the girl’s eyes filled with revenge to grab attention.
2.	Long shot	High angle shot	View of the girl’s entire body which will give the audience more of an idea of the atmosphere
3.	Establishing shot	Dolly shot	Establish the environment the girl is in, the school hallway, to create a sudden change of atmospheres.
4.	Medium Shot	Dolly shot	Medium shot will give audience clear view of what’s written on the girl’s back.
5.	Close-up	Dolly shot	Close-up of what is written on the girl’s shirt
6.	Medium long shot	Pan shot	Constantly until we get to the playground outside.
7.	Close up	Dolly shot	Close up of girl’s face on the ground
8.	Extreme Close up	Still	Extreme close up of the sharp end of the stick to let audience know of what may be coming.
9.	Medium shot	Tilt shot	Medium shot of Vanessa showing her holding the stick and standing over Denise
10.	Establishing shot	Pan shot	Establishing shot of empty environment around
11.	Close up	still	Close up of Priya’s hand grabbing Denise
12.	Dolly shot	Dolly shot	Dolly shot of the beatings
13.	Extreme close up	Dolly shot	Extreme close up of the sharp stick against the neck
14.	Establishing shot	Zoom in on girls’ screaming mouths	Establishing shot of the screams and the desolate environment to provide audience with tense atmosphere of what could happen next
15.	Extreme close	Zoom in	Extreme close up of blood flow from neck
16.	Dolly shot	Dolly shots	Walking in and out of class rooms
17.	Close up	Tilt shot	Close up of Vanessa’s sister
18.	Close up	Over the shoulder shot	Medium shot of the back of Denise
19.	Establishing shot	High angle shot	Establishing shot of yet again desolate playground
20.	Long shot	Still shot	Long shot of Denise standing at her death place

Script

A Bloodcurdling Accident-Script

Scene 1

Fade in: music playing

INT. School hallway-Night

Slowly walking through her old dark and dourly bare school corridor, Denise returns, but for a different agenda this time!

Dissolve to: music playing

Scene 2

Denise walks down the same school hallway but this time as a student she was ten years ago, being tormented by her so-called classmates.

Enter Denise with a gang of girls named Jen, Priya and Vanessa, (along with other boys and girls filling the corridor)  

VANESSA – As Denise walks towards the toilets. Pointing at her whispering to Priya and Jen (ALL LAUGH)

DENISE-looks behind her and realises the word SLAG written on her school blazer

Runs towards toilets crying but not before Vanessa grabs her by the hair and leads her into the playground outside.

Scene 3

Jen grabs a sharp stick to hand to Vanessa.

Priya – grabbing Denise by her blazer ‘you deserve a whipping you filthy little girl’

Vanessa start to beat her with the sharply cut stick till Denise is bleeding all over but Vanessa accidently uses an extremely sharp side of the stick to beat against her neck which leaks out a lot  of blood.

Jen, Priya, Vanessa-Scream!

Denise is left in a pool of saturated blood, slowly loosing breath.

Scene 4 –Music Playing

Scene returns back to the first scene of Denise walking down the dark corridors 10 years later prior to her torturous death.

She opens what looks darkened classroom-walks out

Walks into another dark classroom and walks out

Walks into the third classroom and sets her eyes on a girl that looks exactly like Vanessa (Vanessa’s younger sister).

Looks at the girl intently without blinking for a few seconds and vanishes leaving the classroom stunned and frightened into silence

Dissolves shot to playground where Denise stands at her death place and then vanishes again leaving an eerie looking playground behind.

Treatment

A bloodcurdling accident

A girl walks into the school corridors in a white night gown on 13 Jan 2012. Soaked in blood with a rope tight around her neck making her extremely pale she walks these deadly halls as she did 10 years ago but this time she is back for revenge against those who had made her life so miserable that she couldn't take it any longer.
the scene then goes back to when the girl was a school girl in in Scottsdale Academy and how she was taunted and teased, which led to that fatal accident on the night of 13 Jan 2002.

Treatment

 There was a guy who checked into a hotel for one night. the manager gave him his key (the old fashioned metal kind) and told him NOT to go into room 356.
the guy goes up to his room and Gets ready for bed. but that night he can't sleep so he wanders around the hotel. he comes to room 356 and says to himself "oh why did he tell me i can't go in?" so he looks through the peephole and sees the most beautiful girl, dancing mysteriously and magically. She is so beautiful he stays there the whole night, just watching her. The guy is SO entranced, he decides to stay another night.

The next night, he goes to look through the peephole of room 356 again. but all he can see is red. just red. no girl, no room, nothing. but he stays there the entire night HOPING that the girl will come and dance again.

The next morning he checks out of the hotel and asks the manager why he couldn't go into room 356. The manager tells him that his daughter died in that room and has haunted it ever since. Spooked, the guy asks how he knows the ghost is his daughter.

How does the manager know it's his daughter's ghost?

Because she has one red eye.